Thursday, June 14, 2012

NO NAME I NEED AN IDEA GEEZ!!!


Chapter 3


   On the way in the car I tried not to talk the officers. They kept say things like: "So... how old are you?" and "I'm so sorry." You know stuff like that.
   I swear you could see how nervous and fragile I was. It's like I was a bomb, and the police men were really careful not to say any thing that would make me cry. Even I felt like if I thought of my mother I'd cry.
 It felt like a long car ride, even though it was only about five minutes. When the officers said to get out, I did because if I didn't I was afraid they'd force me. Okay when I got out I went to shut the door and the officer just shoved me towards the house, and she shut the door. She said "Jake it's fine. He'll probably be there."
   The man officer knocked on the door. "I'm gonna explode!!!" I thought to my self. We waited about a minute.
   Then finally an old woman answered the door. She asked if she could do any thing for us. I answered... well at least tried to. One of the police men answered instead. Is John Spotz here? "John Spotz he's dead... I bought this house two years ago!!"
   Tears formed in my eyes. "No more family!!" "No...."
   The police men called the orphanage and told them I was going to come in.

 

Wednesday, June 13, 2012

STILL NO NAME FOR THIS BOOK!!!!


CHAPTER 2


  When she died I stared my face, bright red, tears rolling down my face. Her eyes were open and I thought it'd be best to close her eyes. So I did.
  I went to pick up her arm and put her hand it mine but instead, I opened her palm to find a envelope. I took it and opened it up. It said live with your father. Knowing how much I didn't want to go I knew my mom would. It told me on the note that I pulled out, the address were he lived, and what time that he'd be back from work. I looked behind that note and it had about three-hundred dollars and a picture of her.
  I smiled and in a small whisper I said "Thank you." and I went to pack my things I didn't pack much, more food than clothing. You know basic stuff shirts, shorts, pants, socks, two pairs of shoes. Of course under ware why wouldn't I? Sorry. I also brought a coat and jacket.
  So I waited til' the police came, with an ambulance and they asked if I had a dad. I told them the address, so they took me there. I hope my dad still lives there.




ANYONE GOT A NAME FOR THIS BOOK?


Chapter 1
   Apparently only I saw this coming. Emma my only family (I used to have a crush on her even) is dead. To make even worse..... it's my birth-day.
   I'll tell you my story first. My other told me when I was seven months old.  They got divorced right after my she came back from the military hospital, after she got wounded in Iraq. My dad was mad because she let one of his friends die. I didn't even know his name! Actually I don't even know my dad's name. Sad huh?
   This is how Emma ended up being in the hospital, and dieing. She... well.... this is going to be hard. Maybe I'll tell you later. I can't tell you now.
   Okay maybe I'll tell you more of a back story. Okay with that? Oh wait.. you can't respond.
   Well... my mom she died.... and... it seemed like she was trying to tell me something.... "Jake..." she started. "Jake... I want you to know that if I... die... I want you to find your si-" I never heard her finish that sentence. I was only 13 years old. Yeah.. besides.... my life was never the best.... never.